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MY HEART IS TROUBLED DEEPLY. by *Labbonno:iconLabbonno:



Please listen to my words, tell me what's wrong with you?
You are the world to me and now you are the one who broke my heart too,
I know you love me dearly...boy I love you too,
But I am not sure now what I should do,
Because I still have feelings for you,
You hurt me more than you know, my hurt feelings I don't always show;
Do I risk getting hurt again and go with my heart,
Or should I listen to my mind and with you I should part,
I need some space to think things out,
Because I am not sure what you are all about;
It's becoming more evident much more obvious to me,
I thought much more of you than you ever thought of me,
You don't even try when it comes to believing me,
I understand family,friends,work are important, maybe more so than me,
But baby you needed to understand, that slowly you were loosing me.
I may not have left your heart, I was slipping out of touch,
Did you ever see my pain? I cared about you so much.
Never forget that I still do, I love you till this day;
When you speak, I listen it's always been that way,
You seem to be somewhere else, and don't care whatever I say;
I say this to you hoping that some day you will change your ways.
Please stop hurting me, I can't endure this for too many more days.
I need someone I can lean on someone I can count on too,
Yes you are there sometimes for that I am grateful to you,
But I need someone there full time and that you can not do;
I was there when you needed someone,
Where were you when I needed someone, too?
I still long for you... to feel your touch.
But it's not like before, I don't dream it as much.
I still hear you say...no one will love me like you do.
That's so hard to believe now, after the hurt you put me through.
I still love you...but it's just not as strong.
Because I am letting you go now, so we can both move on.
You still have a piece of my heart..because I always felt you here,
But my feelings have changed, and they don't go as far.
I am telling you this in hopes that you will know,
My heart is troubled deeply and this I must  show.
©2009 *Labbonno
:iconlabbonno:

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For surely there's always tomorrow
to make up for an oversight,
and we always get a second chance
to make everything right.
But just in case I might be wrong,
and today is all I get,
I'd like to say how much I love you
and I hope we never forget.
Tomorrow is not promised to anyone,
And today may be the last chance
you get to hold your loved one tight...
So if you're waiting for tomorrow,
why not do it today?
For if tomorrow never comes,
you'll surely regret the day.

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:iconamitrichard:
I'M SORRY FOR HURTING YOU
I'M SORRY FOR MAKING YOU CRY
I'M SORRY I DIDN’T REALIZE WHY
I'M SORRY FOR NOT UNDERSTANDING YOU RIGHT
I'M SORRY FOR ALL THOSE FIGHTS
I'M SORRY FOR NOT LISTENING
I'M SORRY FOR NOT TRYING
I'M SORRY I FAILED YOU
I'M SORRY I DIDN’T TRY
I'M SORRY FOR NOT CARING
I'M SORRY FOR NOT BEING THERE
I'M SORRY FOR NOT SUPPORTING YOU
I'M SORRY I REALLY AM
I'M SORRY I LET SOMEBODY GET CLOSER TOO YOU
I'M SORRY FOR FADING AWAY
I'M SORRY I DIDN’T CHASE YOU
I'M SORRY YOU SWAYED AWAY
I'M SORRY IT WAS TOO LATE
I'M SORRY I TRIED AGAIN
I'M SORRY I CRIED ALL NIGHT
I'M SORRY YOUR HEART’S LOST
I'M SORRY I COULDN’T CURE IT
I'M SORRY BUT I'LL TRY NOW
I'M SORRY EVEN IF IT’S TOO LATE
I'M SORRY BUT I HAVE TO TRY
I'M SORRY FOR ALL THE THINGS THAT I LET FLY BY
I'M SORRY FOR BEING SO MAD
I'M SORRY FOR BEING SO DOWN
I'M SORRY FOR NOT UNDERSTANDING YOU WHEN I WASN’T EVEN AROUND
I'M SORRY FOR MISSING COUNTLESS NIGHTS
I'M SORRY I LET YOU FALL THAT TIME
I'M SORRY FOR MY SWAYING EMOTIONS
I'M SORRY FOR LOSING YOUR HEART
I'M SORRY I WISH THINGS WERE OK
I'M SORRY FOR BEING AN IDIOT

BUT I REALIZE WE ARE MEANT TO BE
AND I WON’T GIVE UP UNTIL YOU CLEARLY SEE
I LOVE YOU, I NEED YOU, YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING
I'D DO ANYTHING TO WIN YOUR TRUST BACK AGAIN

--
Every good gift and every perfect gift is from above, and comes down from the Father of lights, with whom there is no variation or shadow of turning. - James 1:17
:iconlabbonno:
I know that deep within my heart, there's a place where only you reside,
and when the pain of loneliness comes, it knows that is where I hide.
So if sometimes it seems to you, I am clinging to the past,
it's mostly because I can't yet accept, the way I get hurt.
No matter how hard I try, I can't get over you,
for the part of me that's still alive, believes you love me too.
Maybe there will come a day, when with strong feeling a heart will reborn, and new love I will finally try.:heart:

--
angeloflove
:iconalexrider-00nothing:
sounds like an abusive relationship.
good job telling it

--
"not only for these do i pray, but also for those who will believe on me through their word"
John 17:20
:iconlabbonno:
thanks for your continued support.:heart:

--
angeloflove

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